This is my comments today.
I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Friday, 31 July 2015
Thursday, 30 July 2015
Whats in my Lunch box?
This term we have been learning about healthy eating. This pie chart shows the foods that were in my lunch box on Wednesday July 22. I had 2 fruit 1 sandwich 1 chips and 1 yougurt.
Revising Sentences.
Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on D. D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton sheared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete,take out words and change sentences. Here is my Piece of writing.
Miss Paton’s copy
Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
My copy
Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He’s a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain. He likes to sniff the bin. He comes to my house and starves. Oscar loves to sleep on my couch. He doesn't like my laptop because he does not get the attention.
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Writing
Wednesday, 29 July 2015
Working Dogs From Nyjah.
This is my Popplet about working dogs. Working dogs can be called different names and they work in other places. A working dog is an Police dog,Farm dog,Acting dog,Guide dog and a Sled dog.
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reading
Monday, 27 July 2015
Friday, 24 July 2015
Whats in my lunch box graph.
This is my graph about what I have in my lunch box but different because you put photos into it.
Thursday, 23 July 2015
Whats in my lunch box by Nyjah.
What’s in my lunch box?
Is your lunch a healthy lunch? Why / Why Not?
What was the healthiest?
What was the least healthy and why?
What is missing from your lunch box?
In my lunchbox I have an orange, apple, sandwich, yogurt and chips. The unhealthy food is the chips. The chips are unhealthy because they have salt and the chips have lots of sugar. The healthy foods are the apple orange, sandwich and the yogurt. The fruit has natural sugar and it has no preservatives. The yoghurt makes my bones strong and gives me strength.
What I'm missing from my lunch box are vegetables and meat.
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Writing
Wednesday, 22 July 2015
Xramaths.
xramaths. Today i got 25 and 13 wrongs today on my xramaths and 6 ticks but next time I will get every thing right.
Monday, 20 July 2015
Friday, 3 July 2015
Dance reflection by Nyjah
Nyjah
Dance Reflection.
Friday 3 July Term 2.
Dance 1. What we did in dance 1 is we chose 1 of the brothers from a book called in the beginning. What happens is when the brothers push their parents apart. So then we had to develop a movement and chose 1 of the brothers to do 4 movements and that is curved,twisted,angular and stretched. Each brother is a god now there are god of sea god of war god of peace god of forest and god of wild foods
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Writing
Thursday, 2 July 2015
Wednesday, 1 July 2015
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