This is my comments today.
I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Friday, 31 July 2015
Thursday, 30 July 2015
Whats in my Lunch box?
This term we have been learning about healthy eating. This pie chart shows the foods that were in my lunch box on Wednesday July 22. I had 2 fruit 1 sandwich 1 chips and 1 yougurt.
Revising Sentences.
Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on D. D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton sheared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete,take out words and change sentences. Here is my Piece of writing.
Miss Paton’s copy
Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
My copy
Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He’s a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain. He likes to sniff the bin. He comes to my house and starves. Oscar loves to sleep on my couch. He doesn't like my laptop because he does not get the attention.
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Writing
Wednesday, 29 July 2015
Working Dogs From Nyjah.
This is my Popplet about working dogs. Working dogs can be called different names and they work in other places. A working dog is an Police dog,Farm dog,Acting dog,Guide dog and a Sled dog.
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reading
Monday, 27 July 2015
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