My mind spinning thinking of bad animal attacks. I dashed through the trees hoping to find Curious Kiwi and the group… My eyes looking all around as a ran trying to spot someone from my group. I had to stay brave so I stopped and took a deep breath in and out. *sigh* The air was so fresh and I could hear animals all over. Their noise and foot steps, plus it was going dark and I could see bright tiny stars in the sky.The leaves crunched as I stepped on them. I caught attention to a cute brown kiwi. I took a quick shot and kept going. I then had noticed a path leading to a camp. I ran towards the light to see my group! I was glad and they asked me where I was at.
Today I made a story that has 10 sentences in it. It has to be very detailed but I think I did a great job. I made this story on a google doc. HOPE YOU ENJOY :)
Hi Nyjah. Great story. I like how your story ended. You have been doing a great job, keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Nyjah
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I like how you said that the leaves crunched when you stepped on them. Did it take you long to write the story?
Great work
Hi Nyjah,
ReplyDeleteI really like the question that Alex asked you about time. I must admit that I thought the same thing. Did you take you long to write such a detailed story? We'd both love to know...
Bye for now!
Rachel