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Wednesday 7 February 2018

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Excited Chance

I heard the screams of excitement come from inside the building.

People winning tickets and winning prizes for themselves.

I felt excitement run inside me or waves splashing inside my stomach.

I slowly took my time moving the claw.

I wondered what I wanted and saw a teddy.

I felt like the claw was in a good spot.


Today for the start of the term we started it of with writing. We had to write 7 sentences that clue the reader to guess where we were at in our summer holiday like the beach or pools. You could get bonus points for using special words in your sentences. Can you guess where I was at?

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