Friday, 30 October 2015

My recount.

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
What an exciting evening Spending time with my Mum, Dad and two brothers.

Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
We all went to the Panmure Super z zero close to Sylvia park where lots of games are. I felt really really excited as my Dad parked our car. we all went inside and we played golf first. There were different sizes of golf sticks and golf balls because we are not the same age and size for the golf sticks. My little brother Sasuke was first and he got 3 hits to get his golf ball in the hole. I got 2 hits to get my golf ball in and my Mum and Dad got 1 hit to get there golf balls in.                         

After we finally finished our game of golf we played lots of games. I first played a game that was called just jump. You have to jump lots of time to get tickets.It was super fun. The next game i played was a shooting game. I went hard out because there was heaps of zombies in the game I felt like I was in a real zombie game.

We had 3 more coins left. We had to spend them really good or we would be sad because we didn't use it wisely. Once we were all done we got candy from the guy behind the counter.

But my brother still had one more coin left so he spent it on a machine with 50 tickets in it.
Sums up how you felt about the experience.

Once we were done we went to Pack in save to get some food and ice cream It was the best time there.

Making a sandwich

This is my making a sandwich work hope you enjoy.

Wednesday, 28 October 2015


This is my xramaths. Today I got four right and four wrong today on xramaths.

Thinking groups.

This is my thinking group problem. I worked with Sharon. It was very fun I hope you Enjoy.

Friday, 23 October 2015

Wednesday, 21 October 2015

Thinking groups.

This is my group's work and mine hope you like it.

Monday, 19 October 2015

My recount.

Mini golf. Pow as I hit my golf ball in the golf hole. It took 2 hits to get my golf ball in the hole. My Mum and Dad took us Minigolf because there was nothing to do and no wifi. When we went we were hungry but Minigolf had a cafeteria so we ate cupcakes. They were so yummy we got to decorate one for our self. We went on Saturday  and got there at 10:24 we also went in a car. Then we got hungry again and it was 11:21 so we ate our decorated cupcakes and bought a drink. My mum got 2 hits to get the golf ball in the fifth golf course and my two brothers got 3 hits to get there ball in. At the last course, course number 13 it was 11:50 and we beat the whole mini golf. It was a breeze at mini golf I said when we got home I hope we go again.

Friday, 16 October 2015

My gold group task of y new house.

Advantages / Good Points
Disadvantages / Bad Points
1. The old house can be nice and cozy to live in and there can be things you might want.

2. Old houses can be cheaper than newer house’s.

3. You can redecorate the old house with some things your other house had.

1. If the truck moved your old house in the daylight it will take a long time because of traffic.

2. If the truck was too small the house would fall off the truck.

3. It would take hours for builders to rebuild the old worn out house.

Find out what these words mean:

Hydraulic Jack

How does a Hydraulic Jack work? a hydraulic jack uses forces to generate pressure to lift things up.

When would you need a Hydraulic Jack? When you are moving a house

Piles (used for building)

Plywood. Plywood is strong wood.

Ear Muffs. Ear muffs are used for loud noises like machines.

Varnish. Varnish is for making paper or wood shiny.

Goggles. The goggles were for protecting their eyes so no dust gets there eyes.

Dust Mask. Dust masks are for your mouth and nose to protect them so no dirt or stinky smell gets in the way.

My recount poster

This is my first poster of my recount Enjoy!

Thursday, 15 October 2015

Structure of a recount.

In a recount there are words you need to write.The words are Orientation,Summary and a hook.An orientation is where,why,how,what,When.

Tuesday, 13 October 2015

My art still reflection.

Art Still Life Reflection
  1. What are you most pleased with? I am really pleased with my pear because it’s the perfect shape and the colour is nice.

2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting? I learnt how to blend in my colours for my fruit.

3. What did you find easy? I found painting my background easy because I chose the right colours for it.

4. What did you find difficult?  I found the sketching the size of my pear hard because the size of the pear was a different size.

5. Who did helped you with your still life painting? Miss Paton.

6. What would you change? I would change my banana because it looks a bit green.

7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time? Bigger sizes because I can add more detail.

Monday, 12 October 2015


Today on my Xramaths I got 12 wrong and 10 rigth today on Xramaths.