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Monday 11 March 2019

Explanation writing sample.

Phasing out plastic waste.


Currently plastic waste can be found commonly worldwide.
It spreads throughout our oceans, gets dumped in landfills
or spreads across our land. Did you know that plastic has toxins
that could spread and harm our environment? Because
of this our air will be polluted while some of our wild life will
get sick or die.


When our plastic waste spreads throughout our oceans and land,
some animals will see this as food. Most marine animals think that
plastic bags are jellyfish! Or, in other cases animals will get stuck
in plastic waste and die because they won’t be able to get
untangled and free. Although, if we start to use plastic that
we can re use this could change and help our environment.


If we started using plastic that we would use over and over
again then this could decrease the amount of animals that
would die. We could use long lasting bags, reusable containers
and reusable water bottles. Not only will this help our
environments but this also will be good for us too!


So it would be great to make a change and use reusable
plastic instead. Although, sadly because of our current
actions scientists predicted that if we keep littering their
will be more waste in our ocean than fish in the middle of
the century!

So, if we started to change our actions and be aware of
the amount of plastic we use then we could decrease the harm
we are doing to our planet.





After LS2 finished our writing samples we all got in pairs to check each other writing samples. Victoria and I checked each others writing samples with the LS2 Rubric. We did this to spot each others imperfections and to decide what level we were at. We gave each other our opinions and thoughts in the table columns above to share our information and the things we spotted in each others writing samples. 

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